rememberdinosaurs.com
My client initially used ChatGPT to draft their website copy. While they were happy with the messaging, style, and length, they felt it needed refinement to improve flow and engagement.
The brief:
Polish the AI generated copy to improve its quality
Maintain the original word count and paragraph structure and length
Keep the original headline of: "Welcome to Remember Dinosaurs!"
(Homepage by me only, other pages not my work)
See below the before and after comparison:
ChatGPT generated copy:
Looking for fun and educational dinosaur activities for your child? RememberDinosaurs.com is filled with printable activities, learning materials, and dino facts designed for parents and teachers. Our resources make it easy to engage kids with hands-on activities that inspire curiosity.
Whether your child loves T. rex, fossils, or prehistoric adventures, we have coloring pages, games, and worksheets to keep them entertained. These activities are great for at-home learning, homeschooling, or just having fun together!
Learn About Dinosaurs
Dinosaurs ruled the Earth for millions of years, and now your child can explore their fascinating world! Our easy-to-read facts introduce kids to different species, their sizes, and what they ate. They’ll also learn how fossils help scientists uncover the past.
This section makes learning exciting, whether your child is just starting to explore dinosaurs or already loves them. There’s always something new to discover!
Fun Dinosaur Printables
Make learning interactive with our dinosaur-themed printables! From games and puzzles to hands-on activities, these resources provide a fun way for kids to explore dinosaurs. They can color, solve mazes, or pretend to be a T. rex with printable masks.
These activities encourage creativity and problem-solving while keeping kids engaged. Whether you need homeschool materials or screen-free fun, these printables make learning about dinosaurs exciting and memorable.
Dinosaur Coloring Pages
Encourage creativity with our free printable dinosaur coloring pages! Kids can bring their favorite dinosaurs to life, from the towering Brachiosaurus to the fierce T. rex. Coloring helps improve focus and fine motor skills while providing a fun, relaxing activity.
These pages are perfect for kids of all ages and can be used at home, in the classroom, or for themed parties. Let your child’s imagination run wild with these prehistoric designs!
Dinosaur Clipart
Looking for high-quality dinosaur images? Our free clipart collection is perfect for school projects, crafts, or party decorations. You’ll find a variety of fun and engaging dinosaur designs to download and use.
From cute cartoon dinosaurs to realistic illustrations, there’s something for every project. These images are easy to use, making it simple to add a prehistoric touch to any activity. Get creative and explore our clipart today!
My refined version:
You’ve found the ultimate online resource for all things dinosaur. This site is packed with all kinds of fun, educational dinosaur activities and learning materials, designed for parents and teachers to easily engage kids with hands-on activities that inspire curiosity.
Got a T-Rex fanatic on your hands, or maybe a keen fossil finder? Prehistoric adventurers of all ages will enjoy our dinosaur colouring pages, games and worksheets—all ideal for home learning, homeschooling, or just for fun!
Fun Facts
Dinosaurs ruled the Earth for millions of years! No wonder they capture the imaginations of so many children (and adults!) worldwide. This section helps you use that curious spark to encourage exciting learning.
Explore the fascinating world of dinosaurs with our easy-read facts. Your kids will learn about different species and their varying sizes and diets, and how fossils help scientists uncover the past.
Dinosaur Printables
Pretend to be a T-rex with one of our printable masks! Get lost in a maze, colour, or paint with our selection of countless printables. Games, puzzles and all sorts of educational hands-on activities will keep the kids busy having screen-free fun.
These activities encourage creativity and problem solving while keeping kids engaged. Ideal for homeschoolers, teachers and all families that just love dinos!
Dinosaur Colouring Pages
Find your favourite dino in our collection of free printable dinosaur colouring pages! Wild imaginations will bring them to life through creative play. The simple act of colouring helps improve focus and fine motor skills while providing an engaging, relaxing activity.
These pages are perfect for kids of all ages. Use them at home, in the classroom, or even for a dinosaur themed party!
Dinosaur Clipart
High-quality dinosaur images—free to download and print! Our clipart gallery is free for all to enjoy for school projects, crafts, party decorations and any other creative uses your kids can think of.
From cute cartoon dinos to realistic illustrations, there’s something here for every project. Simple and easy to use, you’ll never be short of dinosaur activities again.
"Great work and super-fast turnaround, will hire again for sure. Thanks for the hard work."
— Gavin S. Founder of rememberdinosaurs.com
The difference?
The ChatGPT generated text provides a great starting point for the copy, serving as a guideline for the final version.
However, in its raw form it sounds repetitive, monotonous and contains redundant phrases that hold little weight.
By refining it to highlight only the key messaging using language that interests the reader, and through implementing more variation in sentence structure, the text becomes more readable.