The original subheads were:
'Meet the team', an action-led statement which I dropped down into the CTA copy for stronger impact, and 'Advice and services', a flat title that wasnât doing much work.
These were replaced with clear signposting.
The original CTAs, âRead moreâ & âFind out moreâ, were bland and generic.
I replaced them with consistent, action-oriented CTAs that guide the reader through the conversion journey.
The paragraph copy was tightened for a cleaner read.
The result is a smoother UX, with every word pulling its weight and MORE CLICKS as a result.
Almost half of top-ranking SaaS sites share the same messaging.
Here's what I found when assessing Google's top 15 results for a popular SaaS search term:
46% said 'seamless'
40% said 'Streamline'
33% said 'Empower'
46% said 'All in one place'
Landing pages
Website updates
Social media content
Newsletters
Marketing emails
Product descriptions
Blogs and articles
Paid adverts
When you know your audience and what they need, every word can push towards a clear goal and measurable impact.
A solid content strategy keeps your messaging consistent, your tone on-brand, and your efforts aligned with your business goals.
It helps you track whatâs working best, and when to try something new.